Script Draft 1
This is the first draft of my script I created after the first session of writing.
Script Draft 2
This is the second draft of my script I created after the second session of writing. It includes no improvements from the first draft and is only a progression of how far I got.
Script Draft 3
This is the third draft of my script I created after the third session of writing. After this draft, I received feedback from my client which which states that I need to make the geography in my extract clearer. For example the line 'Sam looks up in admiration then walks out the door'. This was not clear enough and could leave the actors, editors and other crew members confused as to which door. Therefore, in the next draft I changed this to 'Sam looks up in admiration then walks out the front door'.
Script Draft 4 (final version)
This is the fourth and final draft of my script I created after the fourth and final session of writing. After the third draft, I received feedback from the client which allowed me to improve it. For example, explaining more geography and showing not telling. Below is an example of how I have improved a portion of my script after this feedback, allowing the client, audience and crew members to be able to visualise the setting and actions fully. I also progressed in the writing of the script where I finished it. After that I proof-read it and made any adjustments and improvements necessary.
After feedback, this was improved to:
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