P4 - Final Pitch Delivery

Final Pitch:

Pitch Presentation:

Evaluation:

I believe I delivered my pitch in a clear and professional manner as I spoke about my product whilst making eye contact with the BBC executive and didn't talk off the screen as I did in my first pitch; I also provided my client with supporting documents such as a mood board showed on the presentation and two sheets detailing the character arc of my protagonist and the narrative arc of the overall story. I allowed my client to fully understand the story by providing a logline/tagline right at the start of the presentation, along with delving into the details of the plot and characters. I also believe I did sell my idea to the client as he said that crime drama and shows like mine are wanted by all production companies. He also stated that it was a very good presentation, I was very articulate and expressed a very coherent narrative.

However, he asked why I decided to make it in 2005 and my answer was neither coherent nor articulate because I actually hadn't really thought that through. In the end, the client allowed me to realise that the songs and costumes I wanted to use wouldn't fully fit together with that time period which further allowed me to realise that also may allow my target audience to relate better to the story and characters if it was set more recently or present day. Another piece of feedback was wat drugs are actually involved, is it cannabis or class A drugs for example? Finally, he said that I shouldn't put a bad name on drugs by saying that something bad happened which has caused the character to take drugs which are bad and instead he should be surrounded by drugs beforehand, he may sometimes have them for fun with his friends and then he ends up needing more when his father dies which causes him to have an addiction which he needs help for - I completely agreed with this, and therefore will take this into consideration.

Overall, I believe my pitch went as good as intended and I believe I did sell my product to the client, there were just a few tweaks which I needed to consider.